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Jacob “Jake” Banks’ business is on the brink of financial disaster. Through twisted fate, his beloved company may be salvaged by the death of his wealthy uncle. The catch: commit to a year long marriage to a woman named in the will . . .

Brianna “Bri” Mayfield is heartbroken over her father’s death, which she attributes to the rejection of a business loan for his community grocery store. To avenge her father’s passing, she works as a hacker at Jacob’s company and, against her better judgment, commits to marrying her family’s enemy.

Goss dove right into the action, quickly setting up the stage for a budding romance, but conversely, a very predictable story. Character descriptions were appealing-both Jake and Brianna were stunning beauties. In addition, the settings were quite descriptive, particularly the office mood after Jake and Bri’s marriage.

Here’s the issue: the main characters fell in love too quickly-and under unrealistic terms. Yes, I can see how Jacob was infatuated with Brianna. However, Bri’s revulsion had been brewing for a long time, a hate (and family loyalty) so strong that it’s nearly impossible to vanquish, even by a man as fine as Jake–at least in my opinion. I found it highly unlikely that she’d push aside her angst just because Jake handed her a no-limit platinum card.

But there were a few good moments. Particularly, determination to save his company, and Brianna’s conscious play during the latter part of the story. Goss also created a few interesting sub-plots that could branch off into their own novels.

A quick Sunday afternoon read for lovers of fairy tale endings. -Sistah Tasha

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What’s a lady to do with three beaus? This diva has it all; she’s a successful entrepreneur, has fabulous friends, and not one but three men bidding for her affection. And she juggles them all . . . but at the expense of her sanity. Yet, just like all strong sisters, she comes out on top, craftily snagging the most delicious bachelor.

Ms. Goss, this is the first novel I’ve read from you—and it won’t be the last. Your smooth writing style made me feel like I was a part of Paige’s consciousness. Witty and downright hilarious, you crafted a page turner that had me wondering, “Could I have juggled them any better?” Of course, the answer is no. You shared eloquently the downside of selfishness and the need for honesty, even if the truth hurts. I just have one burning question: were Paige’s issues really resolved by her ending decision? A great storyline that deserves four pink diamonds. - Sistah Tasha

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